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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  RedrumSalad on 18th April 2010, 5:09 pm

i bet you he eats Casey, lololol


great story, keep it coming

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  Qthewinner on 18th April 2010, 10:05 pm

2:49 PM Sunday. "So two humans walk into a zombie bar..."

The radio buzzes, interrupting Tom and Casey's break in a quiet construction site.
"This is a emergency broadcast, if there is any person not infected, you must reach the extraction points spread out throughout Liberty City. President Melson has given the U.S. Air force orders to eliminate the infected threat by any means necessary, Liberty City will be bombed until every single thing is wiped out, living and infected. Evacuate the city immediately. The bombing will commence at approximately 1700 hours. " Oh shit.
Immediately, Tom and Casey get up.
"Forget everything else, WE ARE GOING NOW!" Yells Tom as he picks up his gun and starts running.
"I KNOW!" Shouts Casey as she chases after Tom.
Even as Tom and Casey run, many other survivors die. Gunshots can be heard everywhere and screams also as the infected rip and devour survivors.
Tom runs down the street, ignoring the idea of stealth now, encounters no infected, even as they pass by a large column of abandoned cars...
As they pass through the lines of cars, Casey peeks in them.
"Quit it, Case." Says Tom. "There might be some in the cars..."
Casey stops and follows Tom, nervously eyeing her gun as they march along the suddenly quiet area...
Tom and Casey pass an intersection with some crashed cars, but as they pass, a loud echo can be heard of a moan... which is joined by another and another until it is impossible to tell where is the safe way...
Tom and Casey stay close together, crouching as they go through, watching for the infected that hunt them...
They almost made it past the horde that was looking for food... Almost.
As Tom goes by a truck, he runs right into two infected, who roar and attack...
Tom fires one round, hitting one of the infected in the stomach, but not a lethal shot, only causing its intestines to spill on the ground... Tom tries to shoot, but he hears a click.
"Oh shit..." Says Tom as the infected barrel into him.
Tom fights one off, but he hears in the distance... Like an earthquake... Their coming... Then Tom sees Casey try to shoot the infected... But she didn't turn the safety off..
"TURN THE SAFETY OFF!" Shouts Tom as he fights to keep the infected from biting him.
Casey fires one shot, it misses... She shoots again. This time, it hits one of the infected in the head. Casey shoots the other infected, the one still on Tom, she only hits it in the back, then a fourth shot gets it, but not before the infected bites Tom on the leg... and on the arm
Tom screams in pain and lies there...
Casey walks up to Tom's prone body as he lays there.
Tom's eyes are closed and he is in pain, his body shaking... Casey takes aim with her pistol, tears in her eyes, but then Tom opens his eyes.
"If you want to get out alive, RUN. NOW." Snarls Tom, forcing himself up with new energy. Casey stays there...
"I think you didn't hear me, RUN and DON'T look back!" Yells Tom... Casey, in tears, runs... Leaving Tom to slowly walk away from the coming death... Tom's head hurts even more, like someone was splitting it, but he keeps going...
'I can't make it much further...' Thinks Tom... 'They got me...'
Tom hobbles into an apartment complex, closing the intact door. Tom's leg collapses from under him and he crawls to the the desk and let's it support him...
'Good night, Casey... I hope there is a better world out there for you...' Thinks Tom as he drifts off into a fevered sleep...

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  RedrumSalad on 18th April 2010, 11:10 pm

hmmmmmm, this better not be the end.....

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  Bornkillajazzman on 19th April 2010, 10:40 pm

Very interesting.

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  Qthewinner on 21st April 2010, 1:36 pm

3:47 PM GAME OVER, MAN! GAME OVER!

Tom lays there, his mind in a blaze of thought... Thoughts of escape and survival, and also of... a unholy hunger... As two infected bang on the door... it starts to crack under the pressure of their fists and their moans penetrate even Tom's fevered dreams...
Dreaming of ripping people apart and feasting on their flesh, Tom starts to smile, until he hears something...
"Get up." Says a voice.
Tom ignores the voice, until it says more forcefully,
"GET UP." Tom feels something else, something of his old mindset coming back...
"GET UP, YOU SON OF A BITCH!" Yells the voice.
"GET UP AND FIGHT FOR YOUR LIFE, DON'T YOU DARE GIVE UP NOW!" Tom's eye open, their now red gleam showing right as the infected finally break through the doors... And a new rage fills Tom...
Tom leaps at the infected in a surprising turn of events and punches one, sending it flying, then grabs one by the neck, lifts and slams it against the ground. The other infected jumps on Tom, but he grabs its neck and in moments, snaps it, tossing the body to the ground... Tom looks up and roars... but not like he ever could or would...

Casey runs through a warehouse, being chased by two infected... "Not now...." Says Casey as she runs to the door leading to the docks, opening it and barely slamming it behind her as the infected crash into the door... But the door leads to a balcony, there is no other way... She looks down, seeing that she could make the jump... or break her legs... She jumps, just as the infected break down the door. Falling to the ground, Casey's last thoughts were a prayer that this would not be her end... One of her legs makes a snapping noise as she crashes down into the ground, her leg is broken... 'No...' Thinks Casey as she barely controls a scream of pain... Crawling away into a small building, Casey listens as the infected roar and slam her door... 'I can't end up like dad...' Thinks Casey. 'No...' Turning the safety off, Casey leans up against a wall and points the gun at her head...

Tom almost seems to fly as he runs through the streets, faster than any human should go, he doesn't even bleed from his wounds anymore. Any infected getting in his way are massacred as he destroys their weak bodies with his bare hands... Tom laughs like a maniac, his human side showing for a moment. Running into a warehouse, Tom smells the smell of a little friend he met earlier as he runs out a door that had recently been broken...
Casey cries silently as she tries to force herself to pull the trigger and end her doomed life... As she finally starts to pull the trigger, two loud bangs, louder than the others are heard and the door is kicked in, the entire thing crashing down. Standing in the door was Tom... no... His face was horrible... those red eyes, but it was what Tom was... Casey takes aim, ending the nightmare for a friend, when Tom leaps faster than any infected she'd seen...
Smacking the gun out of her hand, Tom almost takes a bite out of this bitch's head, but he stops himself...
"Casey..." Says Tom. Casey doesn't react, not believing that it is still him...
"Broken leg, apparently attempted suicide... Disappointing."
Casey stares, shocked that he had not completely changed yet. "Tom, ho-" She starts, but Tom grabs Casey, lifting her up and starts to run out the door.
"No questions, we are leaving this hellhole." Says Tom, his red eyes starting to turn back to their normal brown color.
Tom hears the sounds of helicopters in the distance and goes after the sound, carrying Casey with her broken leg...
Tom and Casey ran through the docks, the warehouses and infected until they finally reach the gates of the compound that the evacuation would be. But, before Tom can get close enough to get help, a bullet shot goes through Tom's shoulder, barely missing his head, he falls over and Casey goes flying off his back, crashing into a crate and passing out momentarily.
"Eliminate the infected and check the girl for bites" A voice commanded as Casey opened her eyes.
Watching two men come over, one moving towards Tom, the other to her... The soldier near Casey puts a finger on her neck to check her pulse, then looks her up and down.
"No bites noted, sir." Yelled the soldier.
"Lots of bites on this one." Commented the other soldier, looking back... Right when Tom's eyes open, red again. Pushing himself up from the ground, Tom grabs the soldier to steady himself, then bites his neck, while using him as a shield, running back.
"We got a serious one!" Says the commanding officer, walking out of the compound with a few more troops. "TAKE IT DOWN!"
They shoot, but the monster that was Tom dodges the bullets, dropping the now bullet riddled soldier and running into a warehouse...
"Get the girl inside to the evac helicopter, NOW!" Yells the officer to one of his men, who picks up the dazed Casey and brings her inside. She hear more gun shots as the soldier brings her to the helicopter, a medic takes her and sticks her with a needle, making her sleepy...
The soldiers keep back, watching for the infected. "Remember, this type of infected is smarter and stronger than the rest and it will get in the compound unless we make sure it is dead." Warns the Captain, checking around for a possible ambush from above, then he hears a rustling noise and turns around only to see a man start to scream as he is dragging away quickly by the monster...
"THERE!" He yells, starting to shoot at the infected, but he goes around a corner.
The Captain checks the corner and sees one of his men, his throat ripped out bleeding on the ground.
Then the Captain hears a horrible voice echo throughout the warehouse. "I will enjoy your blood..." Says Tom, laughing again as the lights go out in the warehouse... "I wander how you like this..." Echoes Tom, circling around, watching the soldiers...
"Pull out!" Whispers the Captain to his men, when he sees none of his men around him... Then Tom is behind him, bloody mouth next to ear. "Too late... For all of you..." Then the beast truly took over.


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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  RedrumSalad on 22nd April 2010, 10:15 am

SUPER ZOMBIE!


good story, good story

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  Qthewinner on 23rd April 2010, 3:53 pm

4:06
Casey opens her eyes, she is strapped down in a stretcher and looks around, seeing that she is in a helicopter and off the ground. A man is sitting in the chair opposite to her stretcher.
"Welcome back to the world of the living, kid." Says the man, smiling sadly as he looks out over the city.
Casey struggles for a second against her straps, but tires quickly, the medic looks back at her.
"Careful, your leg is broken, you're still feeling nothing because of the morphine." He says in an annoyed tone.
"Where's Tom?" Asks Casey, fearing the answer.
"Assuming you're talking about the infected that was carrying you..." Says the medic, taking a swig from a canteen. "He's going to be free of his infection soon... He's going to die, I'm sorry..."
"No..." Whispers Casey, looking over the city where she lost home, family, and her only living friend left in the world...

Tom stops himself from feasting, business before pleasure he told himself as he snuck out of the window of the warehouse...'Escape...' Is Tom's only thought as he climbs the fence, only to see that the evac base is empty....
"No..." says Tom.
"NO!" Tom screams with rage, punching a wall, and leaving a dent in the wall.
Running to the ocean, Tom sees only one way to escape this... 'I won't die now, I WILL NOT DIE HERE!' Tom thinks as he jumps off the pier and into the ocean... Praying that no one will find him and finish him... Then he realized he didn't remember what praying was... nor why he had left those tasty bodies unfinished...
The loud engines of jets are heard by Casey as they bomb Liberty City... Casey watches the city of her birth be bombed to a crumble...
As Casey drifts off, she says one last thing "Good bye, Tom... Thank you." and then she thought no more...

Author's Notes: Thank you for the moral support and all that, I enjoyed writing for your enjoyment and my own. Have a lovely day, and remember: Tom's still out there!

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  RedrumSalad on 23rd April 2010, 10:48 pm

if this is the end: NO! i want to know what Tom does! keep going! i hate books that end where a character does something to find somebody or whatever and ur on the last page, keep on going

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  Qthewinner on 7th May 2010, 1:44 am

A fishing boat on the coast near San Andreas at night...

Two men are on this ship, Perry and Teren, they've been fishing their whole lives here just to survive...
Perry, is resting in the bunk in the bowels of their fishing boat, "The Sea Bitch" probably could have picked a better name, but what do you expect from damn fishermen?
A scream disturbs Perry's dream, Teren must have fallen into the sea, again... Getting up, Perry mutters to himself about how incompetent Teren was.
"One of these God damned days..." Mutters Perry as he climbs up the stairs to the deck.
"Ter?" Calls Perry, picking up a nearby flashlight. No answer...
"Oh, for the love of..." Complains Perry, walking around to the edge of the boat... his last mistake as it were, Perry's last image before he dies screaming and being devoured is of a young man with red eyes...
"Peek-A-BOO! I SEE YOU!" Yells the monster that must have come from someone's nightmare...

"Good day, everyone. I, Tom the Zombie, have a single request for you, the viewers: When you are fighting zombies that want your brain, take a moment and look at the horrible creatures you want to kill and just give them a hug and a brain... Because, that's all we want, love and brains... Thank you, and Merry Zombie Day, and now, a lovely song from the Zombie Quartet!
"WE WISH YOU A MERRY SLAUGHTER, WE WISH YOU A MERRY SLAUGHTER AND A HAPPY NEW LIFE!"
"WE WISH YOU A MERRY DEATH, WE WISH FOR A MERRY NEW BRAIN AND A HAPPY, FILLED STOMACH!"
"Wasn't that a lovely song, guys?""
This is a public announcement paid for by Thomas Derry, also starting the "Convince The Asshole Writing Me To Continue My Story Fund, thank you, and Zombie God bless us, every one!

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  RedrumSalad on 7th May 2010, 4:18 pm

how do i donate to the "Convince The Asshole Writing Me To Continue My Story Fund?" lol

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  snake eyez 89 on 16th May 2010, 4:55 am

great story you should make another story they are very exciting and freaky

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A new Chapter in the Life of the Dead begins...

Post  Qthewinner on 17th May 2010, 2:57 am

Undetermined time at night:
Leaning against the railing of the fishing boat labeled "Sea Bitch", Tom smiles, blood dripping down his face as he finishes chewing the flesh in his mouth... 'This is better than steak' Thinks Tom as he swallows, finally satisfying his stomach. Tom looks around, seeing the body of one of the fisherman he killed, the other he had pulled over the railing and broken his neck... Sadly, that body will go to the fishes, but for now at least, Tom was under control. Looking back, Tom sees a city burning in the distance... Liberty is burning tonight... "That doesn't matter anymore..." Tom says, looking at the mainland, at San Andreas... "Now, to start a new life...
Tom climbs down the deck and he finds the bathroom, going in to check his face.

'Excellent,' Thinks Tom. 'Everything's good... Except for my eyes...'
Tom blinks and his eyes revert to their normal color.
'Oh, well then...'
Washing his face, Tom cleans himself up for his 'moving'... 'There was something else... something more important than my hunger once...' Thinks Tom, looking at his blood covered hands, but the memory is locked behind something in Tom's mind...
Tom goes up to the ship's controls and directs the boat to the mainland, not quite sure how come he knew how to work the boat... "Why the hell can't I remember anything..." Tom asks himself out loud, but shakes the thought from his head.
'That's not important...' Thinks Tom as the boat sails through the moon-lit waters of San Andreas bay. 'Time for some fast food.'

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Re: The First And Last Day...

Post  Churros Rock on 4th August 2011, 2:55 am

damn. this was really really well done and well written. great job!

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