The Stronghold

Very interesting. I like the tie-ins with the forum (veterans, 3000 members..) Interesting to see where this goes and I like the addition of A.A.

Some grammatical errors, right now Im doing some work on medals but when Im done Ill edit this post to show.

No doubt one of the best stories. You could write a book. It makes me wish that I could discover this site when it's finished so I don't have to wait. Haha! And about the conversation, just try to talk yourself a conversation. Say something, and then say something that the person might respond back with. Etc. It sounds good though.

very interesting story Fin, you've incorporated UX into with such high degree that it makes me wonder if im reading a master piece or just a random story

Jagdgeschwader wrote:And about the conversation, just try to talk yourself a conversation. Say something, and then say something that the person might respond back with. Etc. It sounds good though.

Not exactly what I was talking about. Making up the lines for conversation is easy, but putting it in text form is a bit harder... Thanks anyways.

And a new chapter is coming out this weekend if everything goes well.

Fuck. OK, I have been sitting here on my computer for over an hour already, trying to write the next chapter. All I have gotten down so far is "Chapter 3". I know what I want to write about it, but I just can't put it on the paper no matter how hard I try.

And honestly, this whole weekend has been like that. I have had zero motivation to do anything for the whole weekend. Doing simple stuff like watching movies that I downloaded, reading, playing games. I don't have the motivation to do that either. Instead, I've been listening to music and browsing 4chan the whole fucking weekend. Depressing...

SO! I guess I'll go sleep early tonight, and leave you guys without a new chapter this weekend. If I get some time during the week, I'll try to use that for writing the new chapter. Otherwise you'll have to wait till next weekend.

PS: I don't usually write this stuff on the last moment. Normally I write it somewhere around 2-4PM on saturday, then save it and think about the chapter for the rest of the day and over the night. Then on sunday I edit it and publish.

Shit i was looking forward to it, but its all good i can wait

Whatever happened to this story Fin? It had great potential.

Jagdgeschwader wrote:Whatever happened to this story Fin? It had great potential.

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