Survivor Story 915

Week 2 Wed 5:57pm

  I find myself becoming a part of it everyday. This rotten hell hole aka liberty city is changing me. 
  Today I watched a young lady being eaten alive while screaming for my help and I just stood there on a burger shot rooftop staring mindlessly. I've also lost all hopes of finding a way out, but who knows the world might be in World War Z right now so it might just be safer in LC. I know its only been a week and a half but I feel like I've learned how to survive on my own here. The key is to trust no one and never be a hero, even if it means letting someone else die. Look at me, I probably sound like a cold hearted person but I was never always like this. When the outbreak 1st happened I was actually part of a small group of survivors who would risk anything for each other but after witnessing the terrible stuff these "things" did to our group, I just don't have it in me to be kind and helpful. Hell up until I found this notebook yesterday I forgot who I was.
  Well tomorrows another day in "paradise" for me so we'll see what happens, but as of now it's sleep time. 

Its alright, nothing special

Interesting read. Seems like reality has set in on the survivors.

Same old same old. I just don't get that much zombie literature for free, so anything is better than nothing (not to deminish your writing or anything.).

Come on you guys are breaking my balls, let's here some compliments.

I not being mean but I've seen no originality anymore.

This started out good and has potential but don't make it end up like the rest.

El Mexi Can 915 wrote:Come on you guys are breaking my balls, let's here some compliments.

I complimented you!!

El Mexi Can 915 wrote:Come on you guys are breaking my balls, let's here some compliments.

Don't look at it as something harshly against you. Use it to better yourself. I see some good writing habits you just aren't working them out. Redeam yourself in the next instalment. Take the bad with the good. Never one of them alone.
Keep writing. You should be writing for your own purposes not others. Who cares if we don't like it. As long as you enjoy it then it should make it all worth the while.

@Black Snow: Theres so many zombie survival stories out there that it's really hard to be original. What I'm doing with my survivors story is making my character kind of dark and bad, he's the kind of person that would trip you if you're being chased by zombies if it meant surviving

Are you calling me fat? loljk

Umm Well now it sounds different; I'm going to watch this. DON'T DISAPPOINT ME

Yea just give me some time to write the next one.

well yea, i think its a good begining, u r trying to make ur character "bad" nd i like it, bc u dont bullshit about how ur character helped other people, nd so i think its pretty orginal (black snow! ) but yea, keep going, it seems really interesting =)