My Life In Liberty City

I followed them out the door, my gun ready for any attacks. I got into the car and DeadApe turned on the engine. I looked behind us...No zombies apparently heard us. He was driving out and he barely dinked a parked car and the alarm went off. SHIT! Zombies started to swarm out of nowhere. "THEY"RE GETTING CLOSER! GO!" I screamed. "I'm trying!" He hit the gas and we zoomed out and the zombies still followed us. They came out of alleys, buildings, even off rooftops! I aimed out and fired. The cars behind us held about 25 people. Two men had to get on Motorcycles due to the lack of space. The zombies had knocked off one of the bikers. 24 left. We found our way to the airport, zombies still on our tail. We got to the five helis and got out of the car the zombie horde had risen from 21 to over 60 zombies! They had tackled two people and cracked their heads like melons. We had gotten into the helis each was able to hold four people....so 2 people would be left behind, one hispanic man and a russian woman volunteered to give their lives. We flew off and left the heroes to the rest. Flying over Liberty City. I had one thing to do. I got out my Ipod and turned on Don't Stop Believing, and I closed my eyes.

I opened my eyes to chaos. Dead was screaming at me to wake up and to look. I looked out the side of the heli and saw that one of the other helis was crashing down into Central Park. We had to land..... we got down and counted our masses we had 16 people left, we went looking for the crashed heli. We saw the smoke and followed it to the source....the heli was trashed, no-one made it out alive. We had to find shelter, the museum was open but we didnt know if it was safe, we sent a scouting squad inside while the rest of us waited. We waited for about 10 minutes and the squad came out, with more people than we had before. There were 7 other survivors. They told us how they needed more food. We roamed the streets of Liberty City looking for food, we had gotten up to the crane and one person lost it.... one of the museum survivors had bitten earlier. He started to turn.... I pulled out my pistol and pulled the trigger, the gunshot was so loud that it attracted a whole horde of them........ To be continued........ later

ok, im not trying to be a mean critic, but, after reading the zombie survival guide by Max Brooks, this doesnt seem to much like the real "zombie." im just saying, its the most realistic deescription of zombies ive ever read/heard/etc. but its still pretty good, kinda confusing tho, the story just seems to jump all over the place.

"This is insane! There are 22 of us 6 don't even have guns! How in fuck's sake are we gonna do!" Screaming at me one of the survivors. "SHUT UP MAN! We're gonna climb that crane and shoot down! YOU GOT THAT!" The survivor shut up and ran toward the crane as me and the armed survivors runned and gunned toward the crane.They got up and we climbed up behind them.

One of our guys slipped and fell down to the ground and busted his head againts the concrete,only to have what was left get eatin up. A young girl in front of me on the ladder slipped! I grabbed her by the back of her jacket and pulled her up. We made it to the top and rested.....

RedrumSalad wrote:ok, im not trying to be a mean critic, but, after reading the zombie survival guide by Max Brooks, this doesnt seem to much like the real "zombie." im just saying, its the most realistic deescription of zombies ive ever read/heard/etc. but its still pretty good, kinda confusing tho, the story just seems to jump all over the place.

Dude these zombies are not the lumberers they are the dashers like in 28 days later or in Left 4 Dead.

I liked it i thought it was interesting. R u gna do a pt 9?

i liked this it is cool

Kylectt74 wrote:

RedrumSalad wrote:ok, im not trying to be a mean critic, but, after reading the zombie survival guide by Max Brooks, this doesnt seem to much like the real "zombie." im just saying, its the most realistic deescription of zombies ive ever read/heard/etc. but its still pretty good, kinda confusing tho, the story just seems to jump all over the place.

Dude these zombies are not the lumberers they are the dashers like in 28 days later or in Left 4 Dead.

ok

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Due to.....unusually high request I will write part 9, I just got to think... maybe get some inspiration from tomorrow's community game *wink wink*

I sat on the crane, tired.... people started to crack but I tried my best to stay strong, hard to think when the screaming of a hundred mutant freaks drowns it out.... women crying, men cursing.... is this over? Are we done? Through the screaming and crying I thought of something, the crane controls might work! I ran up to the controls and grabbed a control stick it moved the arm, many people lost their balance as the arm jerked. One man leaning over the ledge fell off as the arm jerked, 21. Could this arm be our way out?

Interesting for sure