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As the weeks rolled by Daniel adjusted to his knew home in the town's church that Ava and Daniel shared with Elliot, the British Sniper, he was a quite man that rarely spoke to anyone except Ava or Daniel. They fixed the church putting beds and walls in the main room. Elliot lived the preachers office, whose name was Reverand N.A Watkins, who had been on a family trip and had been eaten by zombies. They lived like this for several years, fending of the one or two zombies staggering in, fighting off raiders. This was there daily life.
5 years later... The 30 year old daniel sat at his dinner table with his wife. Tonight for there dinner was Squirrel soup like most nights. They talked awhile...(cries in the distance)... " ill go check him" Ava said. Elliot must have went to sleep while watching the baby daniel thought. There 1 year old son was in the other room. His name was...
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5 years later... The 30 year old daniel sat at his dinner table with his wife. Tonight for there dinner was Squirrel soup like most nights. They talked awhile...(cries in the distance)... " ill go check him" Ava said. Elliot must have went to sleep while watching the baby daniel thought. There 1 year old son was in the other room. His name was...
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Jake, Jake Johnson was his name and had good lungs and limbs, according to the docter. Ava quickly put him back to sleep. They lived peacefully in the Town that was renamed New Hope and had attracted many more people to the town, raising the population 50 to 120 pernament residence. The more people also brought more worries, food, riot, so Kel made a scavenging squad who salvaged a school bus and modified with weapons and armor to scavenge cites. He also created a government that had a three person council: Trade , Security , Leader. James (security) Kel (leader) and a man named Parsons , who was a gas station attendant, was head of trade, made up the council.
Daniel was walking to the repair shop to pick up his M16 that was frequently getting jam.
When one of Kaidens men, who was scavenger leader, told me Kel needed me in his office. He decided he should go see what he wanted. James and Kaiden was waiting with Kel in the office. " Hello son, how is it going?""Good" said Daniel. " Daniel Kaiden's men have found a file in a Air Force Base south, It has the location of a cure that will destroy the infection. We don't have many men to lead the trip, we want you to lead it" James said. " You leave tommorrow" Kel said. " Your wife and child will be looked after" Kel said.
"Tell us what you need on the trip?"
Choice: Men
(A) Two Riflemen w/supplies
(B) Heavy Gunner, Riflemen w/supplies
(C) Riflemen, Sniper w/supplies
Choice 2: Vehicle
(A) F-150 Truck
(B) 3 Harley Davidsons
(C) Ice Cream Truck w/armor
Mission Brief:
The base is north in Fort Meade roughly 600 miles. Two major cities lay between you Salt Lake City and Las Vegas two major cities heavily infested.
Speak with other members and plan your journey.
Daniel was walking to the repair shop to pick up his M16 that was frequently getting jam.
When one of Kaidens men, who was scavenger leader, told me Kel needed me in his office. He decided he should go see what he wanted. James and Kaiden was waiting with Kel in the office. " Hello son, how is it going?""Good" said Daniel. " Daniel Kaiden's men have found a file in a Air Force Base south, It has the location of a cure that will destroy the infection. We don't have many men to lead the trip, we want you to lead it" James said. " You leave tommorrow" Kel said. " Your wife and child will be looked after" Kel said.
"Tell us what you need on the trip?"
Choice: Men
(A) Two Riflemen w/supplies
(B) Heavy Gunner, Riflemen w/supplies
(C) Riflemen, Sniper w/supplies
Choice 2: Vehicle
(A) F-150 Truck
(B) 3 Harley Davidsons
(C) Ice Cream Truck w/armor
Mission Brief:
The base is north in Fort Meade roughly 600 miles. Two major cities lay between you Salt Lake City and Las Vegas two major cities heavily infested.
Speak with other members and plan your journey.

BoomerSooner742- Zombies dun like meh.
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Re: "THE WAR" DJ ...
i think i may go B,A but tbh i am not sure maybe if someone could give me their opinion on what i should take that would be helpfull.

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C and A. I say this because your going to want a vehicle big enough to blow by gates on an air force base but fast enough to haul ass outta there. and I say a rifleman and a sniper because well the rifleman because you never go in alone and a sniper because you need some distant cover. and he is friends with a brittish sniper right? he's got his back and won't turn on him
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Re: "THE WAR" DJ ...
k im going with C and A

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Re: "THE WAR" DJ ...
Nah, id say B and A. (at least we can all agree on A for 2nd part) 

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Re: "THE WAR" DJ ...
OMFG i dnt no wat to do i want the heavy gunner so he can mow down zombies if we get over run but i want the sniper so he can take them out at long range and if the sniper is the guy who lives with me then i can trust him but i have no clue.

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Daniel thought a sniper and rifleman would be useful. They had both been guards and the sniper was in apprenticeship with Elliot so you know he was good. Micheal was his name, been a mechanic before the wore, and had a southern accent. Zip was the others name and was about 16 years old and had just came out of training, been serving for Kaiden about a week. He had was annoying always asking questions he knew the answer too.
James gave him keys to a truck that was plated with metal. It had a full tank off gas and Daniel was given points full might be available. Daniel hugged and kissed his family goodbye( and some other stuff ). He asked Elliot to protect them and he swore by it. He sayed goodbye to most of the people, but could not tell them were he was going. Some thought he was running away.
The morning was cold as he met Micheal and Zip at the garage. " You ready" , " Yas , Sir " Micheal replied. He took one more glance at the town as he went down the brittle and cracked road. Daniel drove 150 miles before they needed gas, no problems yet, a few infected who they just simply drove by, one of the first Zip had seen.
They pulled up to the small gas station. Daniel got out and checked the area as he had many times before. Micheal soon caught on. Zip just stood there like a retard swinging his gun around to act like he was doing something. No zombies but signs of scavenging. " All Clear!" Daniel shouted. He ordered Micheal to fill her up. Daniel and Zip scavenged the store and Zip managed to find some molded bread.
They reapeated this over and over sometimes actually finding food. Daniel found some Jim Bean in the back freezer that he quickly took a sip. Micheal soon took the wheel as they got closer to Las Vegas. A desicion Daniel would soon learn by. He closed his eyes and went to sleep.
" Daniel! Get up! Daniel, Raider attack!" Daniel sprung to action going directly to his M16A4 that accompainied him since the war. He soon evaluated his surroundings, two raider vehicles approaching 200 yards. Bullets soon started boucing of the hood. " Move this bitch Micheal!" He speed off the road to the right, bouncing off the dead terrain. Daniel raised his weapon out the window just as the raiders fired another burst and was almost hit.
Daniel knew he could not fight two vehicles this way and told Micheal to stop and get ready. He dove behind the vehicle with Zip and Micheal as another hail of gunfire erupted at the vehicle. As soon as it stopped Daniel took his aim and shoot one in the legs and he fell of in pain reaching for his leg as he was crushed by the back wheel. Micheal followed his lead but instead shoot out the wheel throwing the vehicle into a cintematic crash. The other vehicle one man short ran to wherever it came. " Thats right, you better run!" Zip yelled. Micheal castes him a look like he was on drugs." Are you kidding, you didnt do jack-shit instead of shit yourself Zip!"
To be continued...
James gave him keys to a truck that was plated with metal. It had a full tank off gas and Daniel was given points full might be available. Daniel hugged and kissed his family goodbye( and some other stuff ). He asked Elliot to protect them and he swore by it. He sayed goodbye to most of the people, but could not tell them were he was going. Some thought he was running away.
The morning was cold as he met Micheal and Zip at the garage. " You ready" , " Yas , Sir " Micheal replied. He took one more glance at the town as he went down the brittle and cracked road. Daniel drove 150 miles before they needed gas, no problems yet, a few infected who they just simply drove by, one of the first Zip had seen.
They pulled up to the small gas station. Daniel got out and checked the area as he had many times before. Micheal soon caught on. Zip just stood there like a retard swinging his gun around to act like he was doing something. No zombies but signs of scavenging. " All Clear!" Daniel shouted. He ordered Micheal to fill her up. Daniel and Zip scavenged the store and Zip managed to find some molded bread.
They reapeated this over and over sometimes actually finding food. Daniel found some Jim Bean in the back freezer that he quickly took a sip. Micheal soon took the wheel as they got closer to Las Vegas. A desicion Daniel would soon learn by. He closed his eyes and went to sleep.
" Daniel! Get up! Daniel, Raider attack!" Daniel sprung to action going directly to his M16A4 that accompainied him since the war. He soon evaluated his surroundings, two raider vehicles approaching 200 yards. Bullets soon started boucing of the hood. " Move this bitch Micheal!" He speed off the road to the right, bouncing off the dead terrain. Daniel raised his weapon out the window just as the raiders fired another burst and was almost hit.
Daniel knew he could not fight two vehicles this way and told Micheal to stop and get ready. He dove behind the vehicle with Zip and Micheal as another hail of gunfire erupted at the vehicle. As soon as it stopped Daniel took his aim and shoot one in the legs and he fell of in pain reaching for his leg as he was crushed by the back wheel. Micheal followed his lead but instead shoot out the wheel throwing the vehicle into a cintematic crash. The other vehicle one man short ran to wherever it came. " Thats right, you better run!" Zip yelled. Micheal castes him a look like he was on drugs." Are you kidding, you didnt do jack-shit instead of shit yourself Zip!"
To be continued...

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Re: "THE WAR" DJ ...
dude y the fuck did u stick me with a fucking retard?

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Re: "THE WAR" DJ ...
Not to be a grammar Nazi but, I would suggest revising it. And, if you want to keep people happy with making their own decisions, I would suggest writing a story for that one decision and writing another for a different one.
Not to "toot my own horn" (I look back on it now and trust me, it isn't something I am bragging about) but I did do something like this if you need an example... http://www.undead-xbox.com/outbreak-documentation-f19/thomas-s-journal-events-t1575.htm
It would be the second half of the 3rd or 4th. I don't remember.
Not to "toot my own horn" (I look back on it now and trust me, it isn't something I am bragging about) but I did do something like this if you need an example... http://www.undead-xbox.com/outbreak-documentation-f19/thomas-s-journal-events-t1575.htm
It would be the second half of the 3rd or 4th. I don't remember.
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Re: "THE WAR" DJ ...
well truly the way the story goes is my decision because it is my character he is using at the moment but yea i think it would be good to have an ending for each choice just to know what would of happened if a different choice was picked.

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You have to live with your desicions, sorry!

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As Daniel gathered himself he asked the others if they were alright. He ordered them to get in and he drove as fast as he could avoiding debris.
The raiders that attacked him might of been a small-time group, or they could be out of Las Vegas and be big he knew they would be after him, and he knew if he put distance between him and them that would be their best chance.
He drove and drove, not sleeping for up to 20 hours. He finally knew they had given up.
Daniel drove the rest of the time until he begin to start to fall asleep at the wheel thats when Micheal took over, he had proven trustworthy, and Zip proved to be a super coward.
In the nights before when they were close to the base, Daniel had the same dream of town on fire women and children screaming, their husbands lying on the streets.
Fort Meade was deserted as they inspected the front gates, they were rusted and bent. Daniel didnt want to attract attention so he simply looked for a key in the guard house and put it in the rusted lock. Zip pulled the truck through the gate.
They pulled up to a house back in a wooden area on the opposite side of the runway seperated from the other buildings it looked like it was built in the 70's. It was two story withe windows on the top floor. Daniel didnt think this was it so he checked the map again. It matched the coordanites. They approached the building on foot.
All doors locked. Daniel ordered Micheal to shoot off the lock. He knew the shot would attract everything in a mile, but sitting their would not do them any good either. The power of the rifle, punch the lock out and they were in the base. It was plain with a steel floor, steel stair in the middle and a chain box gate put up opposite that reached to the bottom of second floor.
As they climbed the stairs Daniel noticed a corner full of computers attached to one keyboard and a blueprint of the building. Upon further inspection they found the computers were on there own server and still operational due to the solar powered energy that Daniel still unknew of. The blueprints showed a elevater that went 200 feet underground to a small lab.
Thats were the cure was, and thats were Daniel needed.
Choice:
(A) Have Zip watch the Moniters
(B) Have Micheal watch the Moniters
The raiders that attacked him might of been a small-time group, or they could be out of Las Vegas and be big he knew they would be after him, and he knew if he put distance between him and them that would be their best chance.
He drove and drove, not sleeping for up to 20 hours. He finally knew they had given up.
Daniel drove the rest of the time until he begin to start to fall asleep at the wheel thats when Micheal took over, he had proven trustworthy, and Zip proved to be a super coward.
In the nights before when they were close to the base, Daniel had the same dream of town on fire women and children screaming, their husbands lying on the streets.
Fort Meade was deserted as they inspected the front gates, they were rusted and bent. Daniel didnt want to attract attention so he simply looked for a key in the guard house and put it in the rusted lock. Zip pulled the truck through the gate.
They pulled up to a house back in a wooden area on the opposite side of the runway seperated from the other buildings it looked like it was built in the 70's. It was two story withe windows on the top floor. Daniel didnt think this was it so he checked the map again. It matched the coordanites. They approached the building on foot.
All doors locked. Daniel ordered Micheal to shoot off the lock. He knew the shot would attract everything in a mile, but sitting their would not do them any good either. The power of the rifle, punch the lock out and they were in the base. It was plain with a steel floor, steel stair in the middle and a chain box gate put up opposite that reached to the bottom of second floor.
As they climbed the stairs Daniel noticed a corner full of computers attached to one keyboard and a blueprint of the building. Upon further inspection they found the computers were on there own server and still operational due to the solar powered energy that Daniel still unknew of. The blueprints showed a elevater that went 200 feet underground to a small lab.
Thats were the cure was, and thats were Daniel needed.
Choice:
(A) Have Zip watch the Moniters
(B) Have Micheal watch the Moniters

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